So sad but extremely well written! keep it up!

This is so sad but amazing at the same time
wow. youre so talented.
keep it up.
<3jess

THIS IS REALLY SAD OMG BUT ITS SUCH A GOOD POEM SWEETHEART KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK REALLY WELL THOUGHT

I really loved this piece for flow and message and just the complete package was well executed you should be very proud of this work. The story line was great and you kept with the theme through out it great job Plot121

Thats really sad but its amazing

Wow. :(...makes me want to cry.
Excellent poem, really makes you think inna.

Keep it up && thanks for the comment.

P.S. I hope you don't feel like doing what is said in this poem. Always remember that no matter how ugly you think you are, that special person that loves you believes you're the most beautiful and irresistible thing on earth, and nothing can ever change that && that special person is going to walk into your life unexpectedly but change it tremendosly.

Take care!

Wow!it was so sad but Written really good!I hope you continue to wright like this!

Verry sad but wow! it was great! it kept meh reading the whole thing!!! 5/5 all i can say ish wow...o.o

~*~Skye~*~

I love this poem ...my favorite..keep da good working come kid...

Omg...that is so sad...beautiful poem though....keep up the good work! Loved it!

Wow! this is a really sad piece, i dont usually like reading about self harm n stuff but this one gripped me.
The structure was good although i thought the flow was a bit off, also i noticed a few spelling mistakes which can easily be sorted.

Overall a wicked piece! so much depth and feeling.

5/5

Well done

Gary

I=I

"she fell to her knees
and was so confused
he got what he wanted from her
she fly gutted and used"

^^Fly??

"floating amounts the flood"

^^Amongst?

In all honesty, I found this poem to be completely cliche. The whole ''girl gets hurt by a guy, cuts herself, kills herself yada yada yada, has been done so many times that it gets kind of old.

However, the imagery you portrayed in this was beautifully done, it created very vivid pictures in my mind.

I thought the flow was okay for the most part but there were a couple of places where it was kind of shaky.

I thought ''she'' was repeated way to many times, towards the end of the poem it was kind of irritating.

I liked the repetition of ''Am I pretty enough now?'' I thought that made for a very powerful effect on the overall piece.

You might want to add some punctuation in the piece, it looks kind of sloppy without any at all.

I thought that this was a lot longer than needed to tell the story behind the words, by the end of the piece it just felt like it was dragging on.

Omg...that was so sad and amazingly written...i feel like that too....amazing poem! I tottally loved it...5/5

Wow. now that was long. i loved it. thought it was great, but it's very sad and i have a tear in my eyes. i love the repetitveness of this piece. and it was truly amazing, nicely penned sad piece

Wow, that was amazing. i was captured right till the end. (gret ending by the way.) i loved the repetition. Great poem!

Ally. x

This was beautiful. keep writing!

Amazing... i almost cryed... u have a great talent! keep it up! im so amazed.. i swear! 5/5 all the way!

I loved it
thats wat i feel like doing rite now
i loved it
5/5
:]
great poem

This was very well written. Although it was a little too long, it held my attention the whole time! The flow was good, the word choice was great, and the concept was amazing! 5/5

Wow this is one of the BEST poems i've ever read. I'm at almost a complete loss for words. This poem is very sad and has so much emotion. Keep up the great work!! Definitally a 5/5!!