Comments : To my unborn child.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    I agree with this poem wholeheartedly.
    It's unfair to being a child into the world when you're not ready.

    "I know you cannot hear me, but i explain to you why, why i cannot keep you and have to say goodbye"

    It was so bittersweet and brave
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by jason

    It was another great poem = ]

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney

    Great poem!
    I couldn't imagine doing that. Your right no child should have to go through not being properly taken care of. Babies have many needs. I couldn't imagaine taking that way out. It must me hard.
    *Brittney

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice jade good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    This poem is really gd i like it alot xx

  • That is very sad.
    And I am sorry if its true.

    The emotion was shown.
    Keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    I can understand that that was probably the hardest decision you ever had to make. i hope you thought it through properly. your poems so a lot of emotions and are very powerful. xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    That was really heartwrenching stuff, you conveyed the anguish felt. amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by That One Girl

    This is really good and my eyes have tears in them..... wow 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was an ok poem, but i don't agree with it, if you weren't ready for a child, you should have used protection (unless you were raped). i wont vote on this because it is just going of my opinion on abortion, but having my son at 17 was the best thing i ever did. i had my first child at 13 and that was from rape, and he is in a different country now because of complications with his dad and my family, but i could never imagine taking the life of a child growing inside of me. i admire that you were strong enough to write about this.