Nice. The emotions expressed where felt. The only thing I have to pick at is some beat differences. At certain parts you had a nice flow going on and at other lines you threw in extra words hehe. "in" of the 10th line, "the" of the 15th line.

I think it was excellent! It flowed perfectly (I noticed you took out the extra letters that the person above me mentioned). I felt the pain of it all...and I like the words you chose. "Shadows", "gallows", "Icy", "Blackness", and "gaping" were the best. Those all gave me chills....great job!

Speechless...
Breathtaking.
Chill-giving.
I'd say 5/5 =D

Wow.... i dont know what to say but wow... it took all the words away from meh! great job!
~*~Skye~*~

Another brilliant poem. Well done. Keep writing and I'll keep reading and voting. :)

Wow. this is another excellent poem <333

Dat was really good!check mine out an dcomment plz!!!!!!!

Wow I loved this poem,
love the ryming
it reminds meof something that happened to me in my past but very good 5/5

"Our loves tired and it's worn,
No longer a flower, just a thorn"

beautiful writting. i loved those lines. its like it flow out at me. good good job