I really liked this poem simple yet meaningful! keep it up!!...
luv bree x

Thaqt is really good poem keep it up
luve hailey

REALLY NEAT S0NG... i L0VE iT. 5/5 iN MY B0OK !
KEEP UP THE G R E A T W0RK !

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So cute if you see somebody as your perfection hhihi =) Nice poem =]

A very sweet poem ,well done.

TRUE LOVE! wow i love it ! :) Great poem! keep it up! 5/5 ,,,,Melody :)

Good poem it was very meaningful

Oh that is so sweet!! very meaningful! <3...simple yet complicated true love..

I really like this poem, just because you put some of your heart into it

Great poem : ) its adorable and is full of emotion i love it <33 5/5

Love this poem.
To me its your best one because it has so much meaning and emotion in it.
Like i said on the other poem, the person that gets your love is extremely lucky

5/5

~Mz.Raven

LovelY.....

luzaN

Very interesting poem, it is sweet! You wrote this piece honestly and it is very touching. I don't like form of this poem but it is still very original and atmosphere is created greatly! 5/5

This was so amazing. The last sentence, wow. That really stood out to me. This was so sweet, great job!!

Well written, makes me wonder who the lucky one is ;P