Wow, you may say its not a poem poem, but i think its the most poetic piece ive read today 5/5 awesome imagery, full with depth and emotiong. i love it!
nuff luv xx

Incredibly long but quite nice

This piece struck a chord with me of Celine Dion's song, "It's All Coming Back To Me Now". Although it's not that vivid and descriptive, I adored how it conjured mental images in the mind, which generated the supposedly memories of times past. Your use of a repetitive poetic technique in some lines was done rather well, for it somehow helped in making this poem quite nostalgic. The only complaint I have in mind was its unnatural flow (or, there is an absence of poetic rhythm). Due perhaps to its distinctive structure, it doesn't flow fluidly like normal. Restructuring the whole piece would--in my humblest opinion--most likely augment its flow. A fine effort, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing. ~Marian

It's magical.
It's perfect.
I open my eyes...
...It's gone.
^^those lines are wonderful!
&& what d'ya mean its not really a poem poem lol.. its a poem and its great. you did a really good job and i look forward to readin more of your poems
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Wow, beautifully written one. It is very emotional and captivating, excellently written.
Great job, 5/5.

This was amazing, incredible, I can't even explain, it held so much raw talent and emotion. I could feel every feeling you felt, you have a certain power to the poem that i wish i could gain. great job!

Think poem is long as fcuk.. but i loved every second of it!! im glad i read the whole thing.. i which i wouldve ne ways becuase you had me from the beggining!! good job, sweet, cute,, good word choice
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5/5

Such an amazing piece of work,
even if its not a poem kinda but i seriously admired each and every word of urs.. I heartily read the whole story and at the moment i dont have the exact words to express what iam feeling..
Keep up the good work and keep writing.. :)