This is a really good poem! 5/5! Keep it up!
Sarah xx

This poem is kinda different but oh well who isnt these days i like it keep it up
carly

Holy crap.
That was AMAZING!
One of my favourite poems on this site!
Just.. WOW. im amazed at the moment.
The end really finished it off with a pow!
Another great write.

It is interesting, idea is original. I like how you wrote this one, it is short but very effective. Some lines are really excellent. It deserves 5/5