Comments : Just a child x

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    If you want me to help you
    Then let's begin
    First hun;do it as stanzas and make sure they are not too long as the lines' length
    And please capitalize 'i's
    But other than that
    There were so many powerful words there
    I liked it
    Just be careful at these points and you will do it flawless
    With love,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Hey well written! it really flowed no matter how you chose to structure it! i always think if a poem is good its good, why wud putting in stanza's make the poem any more meaningful or well penned??? exactly it wouldn't! so it looks prettier big deal! sheer talent speaks for itself here.

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    OMG That is amazing...I love it... That's......Wow. 5/5 easy.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    That was totally awesome , great poem, well written and the flow was good, point made in poem it was good and it gets the readers attention, main things to remember, great job keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by That One Girl

    Wow....... again im speechless...thats just.......wow 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxBrOkEnAnGeLxXx

    Thats realli good aye.
    i know people that go thru this kinda stuff and it shouldnt happen. well anyways 5/5 great writing...

  • 15 years ago

    by Jade

    5/5 :(