Comments : Always On My Mind

  • 12 years ago

    by sadeyes

    This is a very sweet poem and the feelings in your heart and if he feels the same way about you than you are truly blessed

  • 12 years ago

    by MandiMae

    Wow brit that is alove poem I can read. I don't usually like poems about love because they are usually really mushy and gross but this one iswell written. I like how you can state your feelings with out being a gross mush.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Cute and sweet!

  • 12 years ago

    by xXxSurrenderToMyWrathxXx

    This poem is so deep! You blended the words perfectly and your really good at it! You've got some serious talent!! I'm happy for you and your man, too! Plz check some of my poems!

  • 12 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Thats a really nice piece :) i like the way its an obvious message but also left you thinking of your own things good job and tieing in nature and your dream was a great idea!

  • 12 years ago

    by Debbie

    You brought into play a refreshing setting: a nice place to daydream one's desires. I fairly believed that it fit well with the poem's ambiance as well. Really wistful and quite dreamy. I liked the little twist at the ending. An adorable piece. All the best!

  • 12 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Omg!! u r a great writer i love this poem (except imma change the name t.j) when i read it cuz hes yours and i like sumone else...anyway i loved it and i give it a 5/5