Wow brit that is alove poem I can read. I don't usually like poems about love because they are usually really mushy and gross but this one iswell written. I like how you can state your feelings with out being a gross mush.
You brought into play a refreshing setting: a nice place to daydream one's desires. I fairly believed that it fit well with the poem's ambiance as well. Really wistful and quite dreamy. I liked the little twist at the ending. An adorable piece. All the best!