I can truly relate
great write
me likey alot
-laura-

WOW!!!! I love this!!! so much emotion in it...wow, very nice work...wow

It had alot of feeling keep up the good no great work
~*kalene*~

Great emotion and feeling in it. I would say just work on the flow, but that doesn't matter that much, I guess. Please keep writing, I loved this piece a lot!

Very emotional... and hearfelt as well...
very well expressed....
good write..
keep up...