Aww this is so sad. loved the emotions and feelings. so sorry your going through this. im ere to chat if ever wanna =]
nuff luv, dnt stop writing xx

This poemis so amazing!
it's one of my favorite poems!
great job
5/5!
=]
--Jess

Ah, i loved this poem mate. i only saw a few minor mistakes that you can edit in this stanza,
"how long will it take to fixher life
and mend all torn insideof her"
anyway 4/5.

Oh god, this is really a great poem that you done a great job writting it.
keep up the great job dear.5/5

Amazingly amazing poem. love the ending lots.
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5/5

This was so sad.i can relate to it very well.the vivid imagery was excellent.the flow was even better.keep up the good work.
love
emmeline

I love how much emotion is in this you are a great writter. keep it up!

Wow. You really put a lot of STRONG emotion into this.
You kept my attention through the whole poem.
Great job!
5/5
_Amber_

That was so sad! I loved it, though! 5/5 Awesome job, huni!

That was so sad! I loved it, though! 5/5 Awesome job, huni!

U need to write a poem about muah!!! bwahahahahaha lol i like this poem!!!

toodles love!
Larissa!!

Another beautiful short and sweet poem by you. Again the flow is beautiful and the poem is nice with lexical and poetic quality. Your imagery is superb and its worth 5/5 and you got it :)

With love
Fsams

I usually do not read sad poems but u r to sad what i am to romanticism...i am touched here

You will always have bad times in life, but it will always wake you up to the good stuff you weren't paying attention to. Everythingh appens for a reason and everything is a miracle, Amazing job as always, great flow - 5/5 GG23