Comments : My Life With A Ball And Chain

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris

    This is a really good snap shot of your life. It takes a lot of skill and guts to be able to sit down and write your life like that. It was a great poem, I hope you don't lose hope in writing. You are a great poet and don't let a few bad comments or votes stop you from doing something amazing. Keep up the good work.

    Love Chris

  • 16 years ago

    by alexander

    Great Poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this is greatly written a perfect poem which was so different from what i usually read, you have showed ur great talent. keep up the great job and a 5/5 from me cause u really deserve it.

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    Awesome.. This poem is wonderful.. I like it..
    7th and 8th stanzas, I like them..
    It's long, but didn't make me yawn.. breathtaking.. The choice of words is simple enough, but the flow was great..
    You deserve 5/5, why you were affraid people will give you a low low vote.. ? ;)
    Well done..
    Keep up the good work.. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Wow! i really enjoyed this poem! it was such and enjoyable read of how you went up form the ages 5/5 i loved it keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Aisha

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, it flows and keeps the reader intrigued! you should write loads more and not be put down by any bad comments or votes :]

    Keep it up!

    tc, Aisha

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole Williams

    I have u under my favourite poets for a while now. i pretty much love u work ae!! its so depressing, but i really love what u right, so meaningful and crap ya know gurl? well good luck with ur life, and yeah, keep it up, its good to write, easier isnt it??

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Love this one. Interesting!!!