I loved this, especially the way you had the same end line for the whole poem, it really worked and is quite a challenge to do well. A good message in a good poem, well done

I love it

This is a good poem!!
i loved it!!! gr8 job!!
5/5
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Wow really touching and sad...

you got me!!!

5/5

Very touching.. i know what thats like but for guy.. ive broken down and cried but i know that she loved me as a friend.. the death part well.. ill leave that part out