Comments : Weeping Willow

  • 16 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    I really like this piece Dear Ang....although sad, I could relate to the weeping willow alone on the hill. Another great nature piece by you.

  • I Love Nature Poems...Sadly I Could Never Write Them As Beautifully As You've Displayed...I Think This Poem Says Alot
    5/5
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Dear, what a beautiful nature poems you penned here, simply yet flow with beautiful ended....awesome! hugs.

    "Everything in life is temporary. So if things are going good, enjoy it because it won't last forever. And if things are going bad, don't worry because it won't last forever either."

  • 16 years ago

    by Laura

    The word willow has special meaning to me as well as it being my fav type of tree.
    this beautiful natuure piece has it all...sadness, struggle and the will to survive...i most appreciated you sharing this write with all of us willow!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    But her leaves do weep. I would change this line. Find something that rhymes with green or change that line to, it throws off the flow of an otherwise beautiful piece.
    but her leaves forever will weep
    This line also flows funny to me. I would change it to Destined to forever weep or something else. The imagery is wonderful, I do love nature poems. Nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by skye16

    For some reason i want to watch harry potter now.... great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Where the hell did you come up with this? I LOVE THIS! Very creative...very nice! I'm a bit jealous I didn't think of it myself! HAHAHA I love it Ang! Beautiful stuff!

  • 16 years ago

    by renee xo

    Omg this is so good i love it!! keep up the good work.. if i could figure out how to vote i would give u a 5 but im not that smart:P