Forever more.

by CHOKE   Jun 20, 2007


I take your precious gift,
I accept it with promises I won't break.
So as I mend your heart with mine,
I give you all the love I have, to take.

A joyous day this is,
The acceptance of one another.
We're joining as one,
As two true lovers.

I'm making a promise,
Of honesty and respect.
I cherish your heart,
And allow the mirror of mine to reflect.

If you should ever shed a tear,
I swear I won't be the cause.
Because love is a war,
And you are the boss.

I let you reign in my kingdom,
I bow down before your throne.
You've won me over,
With the love you've shown.

I accept you into my life,
As you accept me into yours.
Today we have combined,
Forever more.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good contrast to Poes' version the Raven, I like the flow in this and enjoyed the innocence it seemed to reflect good job Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow Its so powerful, I loved this poem!...

    "I'm making a promise,
    Of honesty and respect.
    I cherish your heart,
    And allow the mirror of mine to reflect."

    ^^^This is definetly my favorite stanza, but I love the rest to!

    Again it is another ((amazing)) touching poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow trully powerful i loved it so much 5/5 could you read my newest one.