This poem was good! Well written, wonderful wording, and I could tell a lot of thought was put into it. It seemed a bit rough, at first, but other then that is was excellent

5/5

This one was really good as well.., you have some serious talent. i loved the imagary you formed with your words! wow! keep it up! :o]

Great poem..i loved the metaphors that you have hidden within your poem..it says a lot without saying much at all..the flow was really good as well...keep up the great work.