Wow thats great. i love it. 5/5. it really shows people what you feel

I loved it girl..5/5 keep it up.!

XoXsweetkissesXoX

Beautiful poem.. ^^
The flow was nice...
Nice choice of words too.. ^^
Good job..

Im in luv w/ it!!!

Great job. your poems rock!

I really liked it,
the structure was awesome :)

In a word AMAZING!

Pretty impressive work, keep it up

Wow this is amazinly awesome! its beautifully written and i can feel how much you put into writing this ! its awesome love your writing
-hayley

I love it ... It's beautiful o.O

This is a GREAT poem! i love it great job. 5/5

It was short. but sad && full of emotion. 5/5.

:Stands up and claps and cheers:

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

XD

great poem, I liked that, short but VERY good 5/5 ^^

Wow this poem is really powerful! i love it the way it is.. but im sure when ur done it will be fabulous!

~M@ry~

Well, so far I havent read a poem of yours I havent enjoyed. This one is no different. I love the emotion and the obvious effort that you put into this! Great job again m8!

Soo sad but so beatufully written! i love your work hun. you have such talent! :] 5/5

Well that was...rad.

Got your message an im glad u sent it to me cuz your writing is very good. there are few that write the way u do. trully wonderfull perspective of anger and frustration

Your amazing.i love it..keep it up!!!

Oh that is so sad. I loved how simple this poem was. There was no need for fancy words or anything, just the raw poem was really good. When I first looked before I read I thought the flow was going to be horrible. But actually it works out. Nice job please keep writing
5/5