What Can Be More Beautiful?

by DeathlyAmore   Jun 20, 2007


What can be more beautiful?
Than to commit myself to you?
What... can be more beautiful?
Than to give you me... as much as I can do?

What can be more beautiful?
Than to commit your yourself, To
a person you've become so, attached
more than anyone you've been through.

What can be more beautiful?
Than to give her all that you are, and
to learn about each others thoughts,
dreams, to grow together and understand.

What can be more beautiful?
Than to commit myself to you?
What... can be more beautiful?
Than to give you me... as much as I can do...

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Main Idea, Thesis, And Plot:
"There is nothing more beautiful,
Than to commit you soul and heart to someone you care about,
And to give them everything, all that you are, to your beloved"
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To your consideration,
Samuel

"I shall always and forever be..."
[Deathly'Amore]

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  • 16 years ago

    by likethewind

    I like it... i like it a lot... u have talent... lots of it actually... its a really great poem... 5/5 great job!

    yours always

    oxoxLIKETHEWINDxoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ah, this poem was not bad at all love. thanks for sharing it. :) you fill me with utter happiness ;p 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Lol i kind of liked it.. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Aww, Worst Poem I ever written. Lol.