Another Chance

by DeathlyAmore   Jun 20, 2007


Sitting in the corner with a lost mind.
Grieving the loss chance I have lost.
Suffering the torment of never holding on to you.
To never embrace you as much as I want to.

I want to swallow my pride and try...
To prove myself utterly to you!
To open my emotions and prove that I can feel!
That these emotions maybe perhaps? Be real!

I want to put my prideful shame aside.
So that perhaps you may let me show you,
Who I really am and who I will always be!
To reveal myself openly and devotedly!

I want to ask for a chance...
I want bed for anew.
but my deceitful heart darkens me whole.
My dishonest pride... hardens my soul...

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Thesis, Main Idea, and Plot:
"To wish for a chance to hold you in your arms again,
To have the one chance to prove myself as I am.
And to reveal to you who I really am inside"
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To your consideration,
Samuel.

"I shall always and forever be..."
[Deathly'Amore]

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  • 16 years ago

    by JUSTiNA

    AWES0ME P0EM. SiMPLY ASKiNG F0R AN0THER CHANCE, BUT iN A BEAUTiFUL WAY. 5/5
    KEEP iT UP!
    --JUSTiNA--

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I don't know who this was for, but it was a lovely poem anyway. keep up the great work. 5/5.