Very good poem. Keep at it and you shall be a great poet just yet.

Listen to your emotions. Learn new words. MASTER POETRY. Find new rythyms. Find new thoughts of writing.

These are keys to master poetry and be the best poet you can be.

You are indeed talented. Conitnue writing.

Wow i love this poem it was amazing good job ive been through this but only i didnt get to die

Very beautiful poem!!!
it gave me the goosebumps while reading it lol.
you did a wondeful job with expressing yerself, and the title is really good too.
keep up the nice work!