(Yay! first comment!)
WOW!...That poem is amazing! It's really good! Keep writing 5/5
Sarah xx

This poem was so sad.
loved it

I fell the sadness grow,
The blade in my hand,
Just four nights ago,
The shaking hand,
Not one tear though,
It held to my chest about to press,

i like this stanza the most.
best wishes
and take care
emmeline

This was fantastic and so full of deep emotions ^_^ I've been there and am still there at times what not as much ^_^ I really loved the flow, choice of words and how you put it all together without any sugarcoating ^_^ 5/5
Rhea