This is very nice, it shows a lot of emotion,, it shows how much u want him there for u and only u,, its great 5/5
Janaynay

Good job...kind of repetitive...but the feelings in the poem are strong and clear...keep up the good work...5/5 please check my latest" gifts of sorrow" "my tears" "crown of thorns"
thank you

Wow, dat is deep! I feel you girl but some of the boys can't really expressed it. But I like this!!