I loved this piece, the rhetorical questions really made me to ponder throughout the poem. It really kept me engaged. Great work. Keep it up

Fsams

A good prompter to make you think and the reason for those questions is because thats just the way things are :P lol not the real answer but its good enough for mee!! nice work i will be checking on new pieces soon :)

I think this poem was really good diffrent, which is good!
Why are toddlers so careless about
what is going on around them and only
care about what flavor there lollipop is?
i really liked that part beacuse it is kind fo true! nice job!

Why?
because life can suck sometimes.
thats the only answer I can come up with for ya.

anyways.
it was a good poem..and yet again it was one of yours that i enjoyed reading..
keep it up.
xoxo
--Chelsey