Well this would be a good poem but it seemed like you were forcing it to rhyme. not all poems has to rhyme. 4/5

This is a good poem and its sad people judge before they know someone its good you did not and i belive anyone can get anywere if they try the ending to this was strong!

Another good poem.
its all about judgment.. something this world does way to much.
I loved it
xoxo
--Chelsey