Aww, this poem was so sweet and heartfelt.
I love your choice of words,
and the flow was different, but you pulled it off.
Great job, it was so interesting!!

I think it's in your trembling lips,
like a quiet love song
whispered through a single kiss.

that first part took me by the hand and pulled me right in, great job again!!

Yes you do have some great love poems i would be proud to =)

Noelle