Sisters forever

by Chelsea   Jun 22, 2007


You seem to look through the bad
and some how find the good
the one that never left my side
is more then i deserve.

You never let me fall
when i was feeling down
you seem to keep my smiling
when i wanted to hit the ground.

You have helped me through so much
when all i wanted to do was cry
you kept me laughing
some how, not sure why.

You never leave my side
you mean so much to me
you deserve a thank you
and a life full of glee.

Theres no one more important
that has made me life so great
you are the sister i always wanted
and the one that has kept me straight.

You deserve the best around
and well kevin i guess is good
he better be take care of you
or hes getting a whoopin, understood?

So I want you to remember
what you mean to me
you make me the person i am
and who i will be.

So thank you for what you've done
and i want you to understand
that if it wasn't for you
i wouldn't be where i stand.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alysha

    Wow!! that was such a good poem showing emotions and laughs .. made me want to read on .. what a great poem

    :) well done .. i love it <3

    Xx

  • 16 years ago

    by willowoman

    Thats so sweat you must have a great relatioship with your sister I'm very glade you have a good relation ship wuth somebody in your family an hope you keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    Woww that was sooo goodd!! i loved the whole poem from beginning to end. you guys are both lucky that you have each other.. this poem had laughs and serious emotionss... i lovedd it, and i look forward to reading more of your work.. 5/5 from me, and keep up the great work.. thanks a lot for the commentt

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Babe,

    Wow. This made me smile. :) There is so much love & care radiating off of this poem. Fantabulous job.

    "You never let me fall
    when i was feeling down
    you seem to keep my smiling
    when i wanted to hit the ground."

    ^ I have someone like this.... I love them to death. It's really nice to have this person isn't it? They're like a big security blanket. :]

    "You deserve the best around
    and well kevin i guess is good
    he better be take care of you
    or hes getting a whoopin, understood?"

    ^ The stanza made me laugh. Woop woop. ;] I adore it. You are such a loving & caring person. Your friend is very lucky to have you in their life & vice versa (sp?).

    Excellent as always. :] 5,5
    Ilysm.

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

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