Hahahahahaha
i heard that word LUST before, am i right baby???
looooooool
tnx for the comment, if only everyone was understanding like you though

Good you wrote the note at the end cause i was about to get the message wrong, i was about to say hmmmm, this time a guy ???
lol.
nice job babe

Hei... did the girl really do that to you? ><
And you still love her?
By reading this poem, I can feel how you feel. ^^
Really really sad, isn't it? ><
I hope she will realize that she was wrong.. ^^
nice poem.. 5/5

"I laugh at him,
Yet he writes
Another poem for me."

I sensed an unnatural rhythm at the beginning (perhaps it was just me, though); however, when I got to flow along with the last two stanzas, the aforementioned lines struck another arrow through my heart. (Ouch!) (>.<)
Still, it is a very poignant piece of work. I liked how you've written the other person's perception -- absolutely horrid! Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care.

Debbie Cakes (^^,)

That is really cool. a girl poem written by a guy. takes skill and you pulled it off perfectly. the flow is excellent. very ironic in a way. once again, great work. 5/5

Hi Goran - that was amazing. Poor thing - dont listen to her laugh at you - its hard to write something like that cause you realise she's being arrogant, yet you love her still... I think... :)

And to top it off I think you inspired me to go and write something different today too... now to just think about WHAT exactly... I have been a bit flippant with my writing lately - so thats for the push start.

Take care

Mo
xx

Aww goran, it was just so hurtful. i can't imagine her having done those things to you. but i loved the poem, i liked the other point of view, very creative! another perfect poem from a perfect poet.

Your very good at writting and your very talented keep it up.

I really like this poem. It's honest and strightforeward but has a sort of beauty. I really like the way you wrote it. It works without a specific rythm.
5/5

Lol very good job one of your better ones in my opinion great emotion is used in unique ways that only you can put it in 5/5
laura

Awww this is such a sad poem.. im so sorry to hear that this happened.. i hate girls that treat guys like that... nice job putting it into a poem though.. keep it up and forget girls that dont treat you right =]

That was amaizing, the flow was great, the word choice was excellent, the emotion was heartfelt, and the message was amazing. really intresting to read this form the girls point of view, you did a great job, with this 5/5

Good job keep it up =]

Hmm wat can i say about this poem. I have always said u were the one who got me back to writing poems again. N this is why i write cuz ur poems are really good dast xosh. I like how this time u were a girl.

Heh, haven't read a poem like this today. Creative and yet sophisticated. Complex I must say. Nice poem over all.

5/5
-Bon

Well I thought it was very good and well put together. I thought it was great how you tapped into someone rather thab yourself and tell there point of view, 5/5

This was quite a deep complex poem expecially for you to write a poem from a different view. Putting yourself in the girls situation is difficult and Goran I think you pulled this off nicely. Emotions were portrayed to be harsh, raw and rare. I loved the flow all in all this was a greatly written piece by you. Well done~mel

Well w/e girl did this to you is HORRIBLE
I can't believe someone could hurt you like that
and I'm deeply sorry
this poem really showed how much anger and sadness
you were feeling when you wrote it
I hope this girl wises up and realizes she needs to grow up
5/5
as always
kaila

Wow dude , you always write a romantic love poems... that was a great job, i know and i feel the feeling inline with this poem... a SuperB one ...
5/5 of course
Keep writing such a lovely poem

Gene Ross

I likes it.
it's great how you did another/her point of view :)