Very nice rhyme, short and sweet, Well done, practice makes perfect.

Short and sweet, I absolutely adore short and sweet! You did very good , it made me smile... XD

It wuz sweet :]
and very good
5/5
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Thats very sweet
i wish i could think
in that way

Really sweet poem, thats how i feel about a certain someone, im so far away from her

Ohhh its simple but wonderful:)
keep it up tamara

lili

This poem was nice