By My Side

by Mandy   Jun 22, 2007


People come
And people go
But I have something
That you need to know.

You make me feel special
More than anyone else
And when you're around
My heart just melts.

Alone and unhappy
Always wanting to hide
Yet everything's perfect
When you're by my side.

[ not very great. but comment anyway. criticism always helps make a writer better. thx ]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kerry

    Nice very simple is my only shout out at it. Belongs on a card, If you wrote more on i would get more of a feel for the poem but its hard to judge with something so small. 4/5

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