Great poem, but you could capitalize i in I. Anyway, you did really good job on this piece. 5/5

I can really relate to this poem especially

"unhappiness and lonliness
seems to always be there taunting"

this is another awesome poem!
5/5
Luv Jess!
=]

Ooo... I like this poem nd the way it expresses ur feelings. anyway i agree with nyellmoonlight up there ^ im juz being a b**** about grammer LOL

Oh, this was amazing dear, specially the piece that your talking about as i lost that piece of mine as well,lol.
this was another great one as you are really talented.........another 5/5

You Are Very Talented..So Much Emotion In Your Poems..Love Em

Great dear this piece is really catching with a powerful flow and meaning in it. I liked your wordings and descriptions. Tc All the way 5/5

With love
Fsams

This was sad,deep and emotional.You have described your emotions very well.Each stanza was very well written!!
best wishes
and take care

How sad yet so true, i feel that way sometimes too but not always! anyway come and read my poems too!

This poem was sad and deep but the flow and the emotion was there and i luved it a 5/5

Quite excellant

5/5 i like all of your compassion and love thats put into it. It's very meaningful

I loved this one, i could really relate. 5/5

How poignant. This truly was quite beautiful and emotive write. Perhaps applying certain punctuations--in my humblest opinion--will help enhance the flow and guide the reader throughout rather effortlessly. This piece, nonetheless, took a hold of my attention and interest as well, despite the fact that I usually am not keen of such themes. Thanks for sharing. =] ~Debbie

I loved the last stanza because I think it is so important for us to find ourselves before we look to others for help. Excellent job as always 5/5 GG23

The flow was a little off in the second stanza. The rest was really good. Wonderful read!Another 5/5

marcella

Netspeak bugs me but I loved the poem :)
It was nice to read.
But yeah I agree with Cella Bella, the flow was a bit shaky in the second stanza, but you pulled it together really quickly.

This poem is good...not your best that i've read but i still like it...i think the beginning was kinda "off" ..but you ended it very well.

good job. 4/5