Comments : Before you sleep

  • 13 years ago

    by Soraya Lowe

    I liked it! I liked how you wrote it as a prayer. Very cute and creative! Go Laura! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    I love it, it reminds me of the prayer i said when i was little!
    this poem is amazing and unique!!!
    5/5
    luv Jess!
    =]

  • 13 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is again, such a nice poem which is written greatly. you have done another great job dear.
    a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Diffrent and diffrent is good, i really liked this poem, the word choice was amazing, the flow was great, and the emotion was strong, again you have done an ecellent job 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by ShadyPyro

    I Like This....Its Gon Be My New Prayer =D 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    I luv this poem..its very diffrent but a good different..the flow wuz there the emotion wuz there..but mayb capitalize the first letter of each line mayb..but tht one is just me...a 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Steph

    Very very good...a sweet prayer! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Nevi

    Awesome! It reminds ne of the prayer we (my family and I) used to say when I was little, but you added your own spin to it! It was really great, keep it up girl!
    Much luv,
    --Evan

  • 13 years ago

    by Tragedyxtakesxme

    Its an awesome piece....wow u can realli write.

  • 13 years ago

    by Mel

    This is so cute, i love it.
    the rythm and rhyme are great.
    good job. :o)

  • 13 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think it's important that we pray for not only ourselves but for others aswell, and not just people we love but people who really need it. Most people refuse to pray saying it's a waste of time, but what do you have to lose?? Amazing job 5/5 once again GG23

  • 13 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    It's different, and it sends out a great message .

    let you children be soothed
    `your children ?

    Please capitalize T_T It really bugs me. But overall, it was brilliant. Short, and simple, but brilliant (:
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 13 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    I liked it.i liked how you wrote it as a prayer.great job.

  • 13 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Haha i love this one too your style here is liek a prayer and i love that.. i love your not afriad to show how you feel. keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by oddi tea

    AMEN!!! I love this poem. Truly written from the heart and a wonderful prayer. You really are a gifted writer. A motivationalist given from God and I have no doubt in my mind that you are a wonderful, strong, and faithful Christian. Definatley
    keep writing!

  • 13 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Awwww this is a cute prayer <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Yes!!! I agree...every trouble ends with an AMEN!!! I like this so much...very sincere!!!! God bless you!! For sure He's watching over you and your love ones.

    -Pink Butterfly-