Wow, wonderful poem! 5/5, for sure!

I love the 2nd and 3rd stanzas, very...deep, i really like your writing style. good write. 5/5

This one's breath-taking .. iloved it .. i cant read your verses -->they speak to me<-- its amazing how this piece is penned.. i loved this poem.. but this little verse jst stands out for me..

Moonlit star, How I love him so,
Though I tell myself that he cannot know.
My hearts been broken to many times,
No longer do I want to love, Leave me behind.

simply amazing.

~Wake~

Wow..wonderful..beautifully well written...yet sad..the poem was so emotional...good job..
-sarah

Wow truly amazing
keep it up!

Your So Good!