Amazing poem.. great write.
5/5. it flows very well and has so much emotions.
Keep it up!

"A man who fears of being tame
is not a man that is to blame"

Verily, this was such a lyrical success. How you portrayed your innermost feelings is quite enchanting. The aforementioned lines are quite true, and the whole piece itself is very emotive as well. I think you did a good job with this piece. Take care. 5/5 ~Marian

The title was quite eye capturing and attention grabbing definitly made me want to read this piece. You have written this poem as Debb has said with quite success. The emotions portrayed were put into with depth this was none the less a great read and im sure an even better write. Well done ~mel