Omg. loved it, it was absolutely great. the words you used just set out the entire poem. the flow was good. the structure was great. 5/5

Great poem, I like the choice of words and rhymes.
5/5

Woah!!! i dont exactly read these poems but this poem was awesome...and now im stuck with images stuck in my head...good sue of words and the flow was good if i could i would give u a 10 but i cant..dang..

Ok thats hot lol 5/5

You shouldnt be experiencing these things just yet sweetie!!! i was 19 the first time heeheehehhehehee

I enjoyed this, you sure have a way with words lol...the imagery you portrayed here was great, created very vivid pictures haha, rhyme scheme and word choice were enjoyable and the flow is flawless throughout.