Comments : Self Explanatory

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to this. It's full of emotions and very well written.
    Third stanza is my favorite.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was deep but yet very well done!!!The flow seems flawless and each stanza went really good.
    All the best
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by ShadyPyro

    This Poem Was DEEP...Actually....I Can Relate To It..5/5 Most Deff

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is truly a poem of great potent, although it conveyed rage within the subject. It sort of have blown me away with its venting expressions - relatively powerful. Your rage and/or irritation is evident throughout. And I think you've presented this well rather superbly. Well done. 5/5 ~Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I can really relate to this, i mean its very well put together.And the words have so much meaning to them and the poem has a nice flow and it was a great read, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    That was pretty good. I've never read anything quite like it, but I like the feelin and emotion behind it. Good job. 5/5

    ~Ravyn

  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Good poem keep up the good work... oh and ill listen to you if you want..

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I liked the wording usage and the topic...But I will suggest you to be careful about punctuation
    This one was my fave but without little mistakes on it;

    I guess Im:I'm just another troubled teenager,
    Who no-one:no one or noone[I guess it is because of the spell checker but ignore] will listen to
    Well guess what, Im:I'm sick of listening to you!

    Keep it up
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Mel

    Very sad. good emotion for sure. i loved the line..."especailly this warn out frown." good imagery.

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. This poem was short, but was packed in with so much anger. I hope this isn't how you feel because it's Hell when you hurt, and no one truly cares enough.

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Wonderful poem i like this one better then the one just read even though that one was awesome too but the last line of this poem really got it i loved that line good job and thx for the other commnet lol:):)

    keenan