This poem is good and clear. I love it and I want it, I now that I can't because it is yours but wow its amazing and I just can't belive it. This is a wonderful thing, its amazing the things that you writ. I would love it if you would read mine.

Very emotional poem... I liked it.

Good repetition

Loved it!!./...can relate!....deep emotions run through this poem!
hope to read mroe like it
keep up the good work
~bree~

I loved it. very intense. you did a wonderful job. keep writing.

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