Beautiful Day

by Nathan Turner   Jun 24, 2007


Today was amazingly great
Is this love created by fate
There we were laughing and the jokes where transferred
I was hanging on your every word

We exchanged stories to one another
But when it started to rain we went under cover
I kept looking in your eyes
Kept looking into your big, beautiful, brown eyes

Before I knew it, it was time to go
We wanted to kiss but not put on a show
So we discretely French kissed for a few seconds
Who can wait? Next week beckons

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  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Awww so sweet very strong passion
    written well
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by megan

    Simple, but very very good. Keep it up, you got some really good poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    This is great I loved it I have actually had it happen so yeah:) Keep up on the writting

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I love it!
    it sounded so good
    Very nice work.
    Keep writing.
    you have a talent for it and dont let anyone tell you otherwise..
    Love ya
    XOXO
    Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful poem good work keep it up 5/5
    i'll appreciate your comment and voting for my poems
    hani

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