My emptyness
by Mary Walker Jun 25, 2007
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Here I go another walk alone. Things are dark here, and everyday that comes and goes, only serves to leave me hurting more. I listen to so many words of so called wisdom. How can I hear them when I am stuck in this madness. Everything is empty, and I am so tired. I have no fight, I see no light, I trust in nothing, and there is no hope believing in something. Don't talk to me I will only bring you into my dismay. Walk away like all the others before you. I'll walk this road and I'll walk it alone. This road of darkness that serves only one. |
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16 years ago
by xArunaex
Very deep, I liked the way you describe those emotions. Nicely done, keep it up. Thanks for your comment as well..=)
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16 years ago
by David
Naw this was a wonderful poem. it was trully excellet, you have a way with words.
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16 years ago
WOW awesome poem, well written and vocabulary was excellent, flow was nice , very good job all in all.
Everything is empty, and I am so tired. I have no fight, I see no light, I trust in nothing, and there is no hope believing in something.
Sweetie I been there all my life , it gets better , you'll see. Thanks for sharing , your friend, Tracy d 5/5 -
16 years ago
by Kimatha
I really like this poem because most people i know left me and i walked alone just as you described in this poem...I'd give a 5.0 (excellent) because it related to me
