Wow that was sad and original and genius too 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Wow.. this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

Wow.
this poem is so sad ..

xo.louii

OMG that poem is just so deep and beautifully put together
it really shows emotion and i love how the 3 words r "you killed me"
great write
5/5

You did an excellent job with this poem, your hurt and pain is transferred into the poem by your words. It can be felt by the reader. You are a great poet girl! Keep up the good work.

Wow-that poem is very powerful!
breathtaking-confronting and terribly sad!
Another brilliant piece of work!
Aish
xoxo