Wow ok no offence but with that wedding poem i dunno why i thought u were a guy so my bad...
so about this poem:
hum it's good that's for sure even tho i might not be 100% with you on this topic, but of course i dunno this guy so u might have indeed done the right thing if he wasn't sincere n all he wanted was to ....well .... u know what i'm talking about...
this won't sound as great as other comments cuz gonna point out the only 2 passages that i didn't like in this poem n maybe if u feel the same too u can edit it. i dunno just doing my job of being a critic.
"You want to get me to the bad side
When my whole life, I worked on remaining on the good side"
i thought that was a bit heavy n didn't flow well with the rest.
"I don't need your attention; I don't need to hear how beautiful I am
I'm well aware of my beauty, so just leave me alone and scam!"
that doesn't make u look good cuz most ppl will think ur just being a bit cocky with this verse. anyways like i said not gonna be pleasant to hear but i assure u that the rest was great n really liked it overall! 4/5

Hehe.. well.. to begin.. thanx for the comment .. and I AM A GIRL!!! check out the profile next time! =p

anywayz.. about this poem.. its about my friend and this guy is after her.. so its not really about me.. =p

i just simply wrote it on behalf of my friend.. thats all ..

THAANX AGAIN ! =D