This was quite a short piece it flowed nicely holding deep emotions which you portrayed within depth. The flow seemed almost chat wise very good in my eyes. The poem was intensely sad yet eerie and dark which I love about it. You have portrayed a beautiful dark piece right here. Well done ~mel
"Beneath my skin
What will you see?
A spark of hatred
Yearning to breathe"
I adored the aforementioned stanza. The whole piece endears to me completely. It was truly a poignant write which produced strong and powerful emotions between the lines. I think you did a nice job with this heartrending piece. Nicely done. 5/5 ~Debbie