Very nice i love it

Bryan
What a sad sonnet. Excellent job! Your imagery is wonderful.

The more I pray the more I think of her
and she will be Just Like I remember.

Memories always keep things as we remember. I lved these lines.
Take Care Cindy

Wow that was a great sonnet i wanna try, looking at yours inspires me 5/5

Very awesome poem i really like it even tho it was sad

ash

thx for the comment

OMG you have no idea how in tune with this sonnet i am... it is so beautiful.. i'vebeen aiming to write something like that since i moved and somehow u beat me to it. I am so envious. 5/5

Oh wow.. that was really good Bryan. You have inspired me to write sonnets :) Amazing as always!

5/5! keep writing!

Another awesome sonnet well written like yourother ones lol good job!! and thx again for the other comment lol
i dont like being in situations like how my poem is about lol it is complicated lol

keenan

This was a smashing piece of work. You literally took my breath away for a split second. Gee. =] Keep it up! Love, moi <33

This is truly an amazing poem.
Its beautiful and sad... it really spoke to me.
The rhyming is wonderful, it doesn't seem forced at all.
This is an amazing poem... i would give it a 10 if i could!