This wasn't your best to me of the ones I've read. Good but I know you have some better work. You should capitalize the first letter of each line. This poem did have a good meaning behind it and spoke truth in peoples lifes. I think many can relate to this. Well done on writing this. Good effot.~mel

"If only life was a script
that told how to be
so that I'd never be lost
from life's endless mystery"
^There should be a 'me' between 'told' and 'how.'

The last stanza is very, very weak. If you're going to keep it as is, 'thing' should be plural.

Those are the only things that could be fixed (other than capitalization!). I'm surprised so few people have commented this poem. It's actually quite good--I like your comparison of life to the weather. Very nice :)

5/5