Comments : My Own Reflection

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "touch the cold surface of the mirror" i love that line...and the whole lead into your reflection...very emotional and well written, great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a good 'free verse poem' :) I have one suggestion though.. Try to put it into stanzas =)

    Nonetheless a fine written piece =)
    Keep up the good work!
    Thanks for the comment.