Try To Rhyme

It does rhyme, the second and last lines rhyme!

Good Work Michelle
Loved your poem.5/5
keep it up dear friend
tc
your friend
Rohan

Well done sis 5 out of 5 oh and check my poems out

Thanks for the comment on my newest poem.
It meant alot. & I like your poems as well. :]

I like it, but it reads like most poems. Don' get me wrong, it's good, but if you really want to stand out, try and give it a different rhythm than the general one in this one.

I loved the poem itself though.

I love this poem

Great write. i liked it. keep it up :)

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Awwww V3ry CUt3 PO3m & a POem Ppl CaN r3lAte toO.!