Very dark very deep great job the strength was felt as i read very good write 5/5

laura

All I can say is WOW, i thought it was very well written and put together.All the words just seemed to flow consistently and they sounded perfect in there sequence, nice job
and the ending just tied it all together and made it the perfect ending, 5/5

Wow this is just one of the best rhyming poems I have read. I loved the lines dear. Its so catching and the flow is beautiful. BY the way I think if you make fear plural, the poem would have a better rhythm. Anyways its 5/5 for sure.

WOW Very well written

That was nice .. You should explore this type of writing a little more for yourself .. : ) .. Keep it up!