Such a great piece of work i love this poem you are very talented strong passion was felt all through the poem 5/5

laura

This is a great work.. But i dont support self harm.. Although you have done a really good job on this.

The sparkling knife catches my eye
I try to look away
But it's too much,
My eyes will not stray

This is my favorite part.. Very well written.. I give you a 5/5

Although I usually shun reading such depressive themes, I somehow managed to build my own impression of this piece. This truly was emotive and distressing. Though you used no vivid and descriptive language, it actually created certain mental images. How other people are able to hurt themselves makes me rather unhappy, though.

A fine piece, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing. ~Marian

Wow very vivid sh!t i could actually feel the cut on my wraist i loved it
_forever carly_

...I can't really speak... ehh... THAT WAS AMAZING! You defiantly deserve 5/5.

Wow, that was good, it is sort of like one of mine i wrote, i will post it later.
This poem had a really good flow to it,
very good,
:)
kara

Wow,
i liked it a lot.
great job.
i liked the choice of words,
it wasn't confusing.
i was clean, simple, and to the point
and had great feeling when you read it.

In all it was an excellent poem, but I feel that the last two stanzas were a little forced. Also, I feel that you have left the poem incomplete. The way you described everything was written in such a fasion that I could see it happening.
Very well written poem.

Excellent i enjoyed this poem 5/5
Oh n thank you for comminting on mine i apprichate it

TeeshxXx....

Great poem very well written!! and i know this feeling :$ lol good job and thx for the comment also

keenan

Ok, i absoultey love this one, i mean its not to cliche, its more of an origianl veiw on cutting, and i like it alot, 5/5

The sparkling knife catches my eye
I try to look away
But it's too much,
My eyes will not stray

This is my favorite stanze.
Great poem.Very well written.Your view on cutting was different from the other poems ive read.Great job.

Great poem, it has excellent imagery. I like the topic very much, 5/5

Wow. I really don't know what to say. That was deep. Like bottmless pit deep. Really good.

Nice poem...i know how that feels :(