Great patriotism very good topic and there is strength and passion behind your words great job

laura

Wow sir,
i dont know how you do that, after reading every poem by you, i get more inspired into poetry and i promise myself to continue until one day i become like you..

you are a great inspiration sir. keep it up

So basically...im pretty sure you already know that your writing is amazing.
but ill let you know again. t
he poem was worded perfectly, and the rhyme and rythm were great.

I really enjoyed this read, once again the flow was flawless and the word choice as well. The 3rd stanza is my favourite as it really hits home, no matter what colour your skin is or where you born, we all have the chance to be something amazing. Great poem 5/5 GG23

Excellent, superb and woth of 1000 comments. Very beautifully worded and the rhymes are so catching. Amazing indeed.

Liberty and justice for all is the law
But freedom did not begin without flaw

100% true lines and so catching

Very good poem, it was nicely written, and very creative I must say. A very enjoyable read, keep up the good work.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Very nice i know was meant to do 4 but a 5th i thought you deserved :)

Amazing! It totally describes independence! 5/5