Comments : Just Close Your Eyes

  • 16 years ago

    by So Wrong its Right

    Aw that poem was so sweet! i loved it. 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Quite a sweet and capturing poem which I belived to be heartfet and deep showing true emotions portrayed nicely. The word choice was simple yet so strong and effective. I loved the flow it was spot on and could not find a flaw throughout this piece. Well done I liked this alot. A great read and Im sure an even better write.
    5/5
    ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought it was a very sweet and heartfelt poem. and it was very nice through out it and its nice to see what people always say to others to make them feel better, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    It's very sweet.. A powerful poem.. ^^
    Beautifully written,and eye catching.
    The flow was great too...
    Very nice poem. ^^
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Very touching yet so lovely poems you penned here...simply yet flow well within beautiful emotions.....so heartfelt written! awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    OMG, dear this was another great great one by you, wow you did this so beautifuly... keep it up dear...

    you know each time i tried to comment this poem the system were kicking me out and i had to sign in again, but im glad finally i got it.lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Escoffier

    Very good writing, I enjoyed reading your poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by N.Lee

    Great poem...... good detail! i liked reading it!
    =)

    please comment sum of my work

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Such a sweet poem.
    Great flow, and emotions.
    A pleasure to read.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Tylor

    Wow.. my favorite poem.. no i think the best poem i have ever read.. good job.. i really love it
    -Tylor

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Wow! i loved tis poem
    "I'm waiting for you
    In your dreams,
    I'll kiss you sweet
    It's me you'll see."
    tis was my favorite like. good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Just close your eyes
    And go to sleep,
    Wherever you are
    I'll always be.

    That was the perfect stanza to end this poem!
    That peice of work was beautiful.
    The emotion and love put into this was amazing.
    Great Job!

  • 16 years ago

    by aLaBYu

    Awwe. just keep it up.
    pour ur emotions towards writing poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Amy Hernandez

    .. EXTREMELY SWEET NICE JOB

  • 16 years ago

    by Sugadoo

    That was SO sweet. I seriously cryd when I read it and so did my co worker. You have a great gift for writing. Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sugadoo

    That was SO sweet. I seriously cryd when I read it and so did my co worker. You have a great gift for writing. Keep up the good work. I so have to add this to my fave.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dance Girlie

    Very good. so simple but filled with a lot of emotion. i really like it. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by LyricallyBroken

    That was such a sweet poem i loved it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by LyricallyBroken

    That was such a sweet poem i loved it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Nice poem.