Would You Love ME (Teen Version)

by Tevin Jacobs   Jul 1, 2007


You never call when you promise to

You only call when you have nothing to do.

I feel like if you don't want to talk to me any more

I just wanna be real good friends like before

I don't know but I can't seem to let you go

There are some things that you don't yet know.

Everytime we together I try to tell you how I feel

But I can't because I don't know if it's real

But If u knew how I feel bout u.

Would it change

The way u were? (If loves was like a book
would u open me
and at least try
to to get interested in me.
But instead
it's like a piece of food
u tear me down
chew me up
and spit me out.
Im more than that
love or hate know one can replace your
first true love.

So answer?Would You Loved me?
By.Tevin Jacobs

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  • 16 years ago

    by ShAnEL

    WoW!!! I really like this poem its awsome it has a lot of meaning in it. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by KIMMY

    THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM!! I UNDERSTAND IT LIKE SO MUCH!! CUZ I AM SORT OF GOING THROUGH SOMETHING LIKE THIS RIGHT NOW!!! GOOD JOB.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alisha

    I can relate to this a lot, keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Tevin Jacobs

    I HOPE U ENJOY
    ALL THSES POEMS R COMING FROM ME
    A TEENAGE GOING THROUGH
    HARD TIMES IN LIFE!!

  • 16 years ago

    by rachael

    This is really really good and if u wrote it to me i would be crying