Thanks for the comment and your poem is really great but sad...

It's nice, heart beating, eye catching, sad poem.
But I think it's better if you made it in stanzas and give a space between stanza.
It's nice , nevertheless.. ^^
5/5/

This poem was quite capturing I found the word choice to be deep the flow good and the title eye capturing. A nice explict poem you have here. Keep up the good work~mel

Now we are angels and in Heaven we dwell,
but when you die, you will go to Hell.
and that is what you will deserve,
because of what you did on Earth.

These are the my favourite lines.
The poem is again just superb and the flow is simply flawless. I really can understand what you are going through. God bless you and keep you happy anow and the hereafter. 5/5 all the way

With love
Fsams

A very sad poem
but i dont know

its seems weird
that you would
know so much about this

but its a very great poem

5/5

Very sad. but very nice :) good job.
julee*

Amazing i love the choice of words!
5/5
Mikayla <3